Draft One : Assessment Record

SELF ASSESSMENT	N/A
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT	Teacher gave verbal feedback
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was    E2     .   This is   below  my target grade of a   C   .
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  Need way more blood to scrub Storyline with flashbacks is a little confusing Consider more Match-On-Action Lighting issue with regards to location Credits are too big and not in good places to see