Opening Sequence Draft Four

Draft Four was not complete, however our teacher gave our advice verbally. 

The reasons this draft was not uploaded was due to: 

• Some scenes were quite jumpy and shaky 
• We didn't have enough footage to edit everything
• Attention to framing was not concise
• Some scenes didn't flow and looked repetitive 
• Climax was not building

Straight after this, our whole group have started thinking of new ideas to incorporate into our final drafts.