Draft Four : Assessment Record

SELF ASSESSMENT	N/A
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT	Teacher gave verbal feedback
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was       .   This is    below   /   on   /   above my target grade of a   C   .
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  More blood and gore- Genre has changed to Horror/Slasher Most of next draft will shot in POV More Close Up Shots for suggestive violence

Opening Sequence Draft Four

Draft Four was not complete, however our teacher gave our advice verbally. 

The reasons this draft was not uploaded was due to: 

• Some scenes were quite jumpy and shaky 
• We didn't have enough footage to edit everything
• Attention to framing was not concise
• Some scenes didn't flow and looked repetitive 
• Climax was not building

Straight after this, our whole group have started thinking of new ideas to incorporate into our final drafts.

Evaluation On Filming Draft Four

Filming Draft Four!

1. First image - Esere playing dead, as she prepares for Shivonne to pull her into the bathroom
2. Second image down -Patrycia put our second in the bath to get a unique shot
3. Third down -Juice (blood) poured and smudged over to create the sense Esere has been stabbed and is bleeding
4. Fourth- Me filming a Mid Shot of Shivonne walking
5. Fifth down- Esere filming a Mid Shot of Shivonne walking from behind
6. Sixth-Shivonnes shadow created with key lighting against the wall
7. Seventh- Esere from another angle playing dead
8. Eighth - Me filming Shivonne stalking and following Patrycia

Draft Three : Assessment Record

SELF ASSESSMENT	N/A
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT	Teacher gave verbal feedback
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was       .   This is    below   /   on   /   above my target grade of a   C   .
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  Pay more attention to MES  Work on continuity errors Use more Close Up Shots Sort out lighting issues because scenes look grainy

Opening Sequence Draft Three

Our group were not able not able to upload draft three as it wasn't fully complete. 

The reasons for this are due to: 

1. We didn't have much good footage in order to edit 
2. We had serious light issues
3. Some scenes were not leveled and looked shaky at some times
4. Continuity issues 
5. Attention to framing was quite poor

However, we have all taken the advice given and will pay attention to the issue raised. 

Third Draft Filming

Esere and I shooting from different angles

Patrycia and I filming the back of
Shivonne following the victim; Esere

Shivonne getting ready to film
the floor scrubbing scene

Patrycia preparing camera
before neck cutting scene

Esere and Patrycia squirting "blood"
on Shivonne's shirt

End result of squirting on Shivonne's top

End result of our own blood